Well, I'll be the first to dare: don't kill me! :)
In my opinion, it's not the poetic revelation of the millenia, but it certainly has a beat to it. Although, it's quite hard to judge that type of lyrics without having minimally some appreciation of the musical mantle that will dress your song, I can easily guess this will be an upbeat riff and a 3 min. song (unless the solo lasts for 65 seconds and the intro another 30); it'd better be, otherwise we could think you're a(n Adrenaline!) junkie! :)
And, if I might add, not sure I understand why you have to scream "War" at the end of the second verse. It seems to be an overall happy-energy song. Why so negative, so suddenly?
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well, I look like an arse, seeing that I am not the first to respond.
As alexh said, try to post your stuff in ONE thread only (The one it belongs into). It's easier for everyone else, and it doesn't give you any less exposure. We read all the posts: that's the whole point of a message board.
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this is a song i wrote. it is more of a fast pace song and more heavy such as son of sam or energy (those r just examples to show what i mean) like its not slow such as second chance or call me. i think u'll get it when u read the lyrics:
Title- Adrenaline Rush
Yeah!...
Yeah!...
Yeah!...
Yeah!...
You need to get outa' here
I can still sense your fear
You are not hurting me
Now it's time to break free
(Chorus)
You are my Adrenaline Rush
You can be Adrenaline Rush
I dont need that much...
Cuz' all i need is my...
Adrenaline Rush
You think you can hide
but I'll find you inside
What did you do that for
Now this means...
Now this means...
Now this means...
War!!! (Scream Vocals)
(Chorus)
You are my Adrenaline Rush
You can be Adrenaline Rush
I dont want that much...
Cuz' all i want is my...
Adrenaline Rush
(Guitar solo) (same beat as before but faster)
You are my... (whisper)
Adrenaline
You can be... (whisper)
Adrenaline
All I need...(whisper)
Adrenaline...
Adrenaline...
Adrenaline...
Rush! (Scream vocals)
(Chorus)
You are my Adrenaline Rush
You can be Adrenaline Rush
I dont feel that much...
Cuz' all i feel is...
Cuz' all i need is...
Cuz' all i want is...
My Adrenaline Rush!
thats it. tell me how u liked it and if u think i need to work on anything
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agreed, i think i responded on another thread? Lol.
well, I look like an arse, seeing that I am not the first to respond.
As alexh said, try to post your stuff in ONE thread only (The one it belongs into). It's easier for everyone else, and it doesn't give you any less exposure. We read all the posts: that's the whole point of a message board.
Well, I'll be the first to dare: don't kill me! :)
In my opinion, it's not the poetic revelation of the millenia, but it certainly has a beat to it. Although, it's quite hard to judge that type of lyrics without having minimally some appreciation of the musical mantle that will dress your song, I can easily guess this will be an upbeat riff and a 3 min. song (unless the solo lasts for 65 seconds and the intro another 30); it'd better be, otherwise we could think you're a(n Adrenaline!) junkie! :)
And, if I might add, not sure I understand why you have to scream "War" at the end of the second verse. It seems to be an overall happy-energy song. Why so negative, so suddenly?