That was really good! And it does have that ring of What a Shame to it, so very nicely done! Kudos, that's definitely much better than anything I could have done :)
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Wow, that was seriously amazing. As i was reading it, it made me think of something like "The Dream". I can hear a voice like that reading it when i read it. I really enjoyed this.
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Since you guys mentioned the voice from "The Dream", Olivia Battaglia, their producer Tony Battaglia's daughter, I went back and re-read it. Oooh, it gave me shivers "hearing" it with her voice in mind!
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I wrote this poem by listening to Shinedown songs, mainly What a Shame.
I think it would be really cool if they took it and made it into a song, but I don't think that would happen. Still, I'm super proud of this:
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great poem, very well done :)
Since you guys mentioned the voice from "The Dream", Olivia Battaglia, their producer Tony Battaglia's daughter, I went back and re-read it. Oooh, it gave me shivers "hearing" it with her voice in mind!
I agree with d_eicholz about the voice thing.
Wow, that was seriously amazing. As i was reading it, it made me think of something like "The Dream". I can hear a voice like that reading it when i read it. I really enjoyed this.
Great job!!
That was really good! And it does have that ring of What a Shame to it, so very nicely done! Kudos, that's definitely much better than anything I could have done :)
Wow! I like it.